Thursday, June 29, 2023

Job's Farm


 

Job’s Farm

 

Huge black cones of manure

almost conceal the whitewashed barn[wd1] .

Above the broad green double doors:

Speak to the Earth & it Shall Teach Thee.

Job’s cattle, belted Netherlands,

a dozen bison and four llamas,

 

gaze at my parked car in wonder.

Two horses carefully ignore me.

The day features cloud sculpture

human hands can’t replicate.

God punished Job for loyalty,

then reversed course to reward him.

 

Our new political universe

applauds such moral bravado.

The Job who farms this flatland

votes against his own best interest

and sends his steers to market

with fear storming their senses.

 

No god expects this pragmatist

to spend a thought on a future

beyond the drifting summer sky.

The hip-roofed barn regards me

as the cattle do. Yes, I’m here

to critique the painted bible verse

 

and the manure heaped to sell

to the nearest fertilizer plant.

No corn grown on this farm. Grazing

and commercial bagged feed suffice.

Thunder will arrive later, dragging

its baggage across the landscape.

 

The creatures will shrug off the rain.

Job will tuck himself into

his cozy living room and learn

nothing the earth hadn’t taught him

long before some angel composed

that gray consolatory verse.

 


 



Monday, June 12, 2023

The Path to the Pond

 


 The summer wind suggests the path

to the pond where otters splash.

First, we wade through meadow grass

 

left unmown for bobolinks.

Daisies lilt in critique of cloud,

their ultraviolet thirst rooted

 

as deeply as instinct can plumb.

Although a purple overcast

has blown from Canada we spot

 

the shadows of tiny figures

at the tree line. They bob and duck,

sparring with rival creatures

 

we’ve imagined only in dreams.

They won’t interfere with us.

They’re pure products of wind song

 

and lack an important dimension.

We enter the woods and regard

a decayed wooden sign reading

 

Nature and Wildlife Preserve,

which surely applies to us.

The path forks but we forge along

 

a trail dished by years of hiking

and sense the tremors of mice

and the brown distance of deer.

 

We’re only a few hundred yards

from the road, but our breath quickens

as the pond hangs framed in trees.

 

A bench invites us to share our bulk.

But we stand in full view of the view

and let the distance across the pond

 

represent long lives we’ve traced

down this innocent slope to water

composed of everything we’ve thought.


 

Tuesday, May 16, 2023

Jorie Graham, To 2040

 

Harvard Review Online published a somewhat mangled version of this review.

 

Reviewed by William Doreski

 

Jorie Graham has long been among our most conspicuously architectonic poets. Her formal experiments and innovations sometimes suggest the architectural playfulness of Culver City’s Hayden Tract or Boston University’s new Center for Computing & Data Sciences, which looks like a stack of misaligned stanzas. However, To 2040, her latest collection, moderates this tilt toward concrete and visual poetry.  Some poems are right justified, which forces the eye to work against the grain, but most others are written in short-lined quatrains, a particularly reader-friendly format that she has used before, especially in her earliest books.

 

The insistence of this collection is not aesthetic so much as it is thematic. Graham faces the coming environmental apocalypse, an expression of her own mortality, and freeze-frames its many clues and symptoms. The disruption of right-justification intensifies the sense of crisis:

 

            Everything hangs in the balance, say the looping vines

the late red light begins articulating. Think about it, they scrawl,

try to remember

what it was you loved, tried to clean up your memories

                                                                             in time.

                                                                                                    (“In Reality”)

 

The quatrain poems, however, ease the reader by allowing the eye to move normally from line to line. But they present other challenges. Like all of the poems in this book they address a second person with whom the reader might choose to identify. But identification is not enough. One of the central problems of 2040 is the construction of a self of sufficient perception and cognition to deal with the threat (or promise) of personal and species extinction. The search itself is threatening, as it mirror-reverses and internalizes perception so that it and cognition become indistinguishable:

 

 

                                    Where

            is my body to

guide me I

 

think. I tap at

the prisoner in

there, is that the

schoolroom, the

 

blank in the lesson,

is that my soul

gradually by its ten

thousand adjustments

 

to its own in-

creasing absence opening

too far. Is it blind. I

tap my face which is

 

gone on the glass which is

not gone. Don’t stop

I hear my mind hiss,

don’t stop for

 

anything.

                                    (“I”)

 

As the title of this poem reminds us, I is someone else, as Rimbaud famously noted. But I is also the self being constructed on the page before us. And it is an invitation to reconstruct our own sense of personhood to face and redeem ourselves from the grammatical notion of “I” to enter a difficult process of reorientation. I have previously argued that Graham’s poetry tends to be more narrative than lyric. However, that is less true of this book, which is primarily lyric in its stance and tactics. Lyric poetry typically explores disjunctions: between self and another (love poetry); between self and nature (nature poetry); between self and the perceptible world (philosophical poetry); between self and the ineffable (religious poetry). Graham adds another disjunction: between the part of the mind that perceives nature and the part of the mind that is nature. At the same time, she juxtaposes her sense of her own mortality with the coming planet-wide extinction. This is complex territory, and Graham uses complex and subtle rhetorical devices to engage it.

 

Yet in her summary closing poem she invokes rain as the inclusive metaphor, a healing and critique. Here rain is not just a renewal but the embodiment of creation. The speaker (and someone else) first mistake it for wind. But they realize it is richer and more inclusive than wind, a source of memory and cosmic reach.

 

as if the air turned green,

as if the air were the deep in-

side of the earth

we can never reach

 

where it reaches out to

those constellations we have not

discovered, not named, & now

never will,

 

and which are not dead, no—

 

And it brought memory.                                          (“Then the Rain”)

 

Then she steps out into the weather and sits on a wall and allows herself to be absorbed or sculpted by it. The rain, a process more than an event, assures her she isn’t dying, although much of this book suggest otherwise. The poem and the book conclude with the rain, wind, earth, seeds and everything else urging her to “touch it all, / start with your face, // put your face in us.” This play on “put your faith in us,” as a lesser poet might put it, leaps the disjunction between self and nature by asserting the sheer physicality of our bond. We are creatures, not abstractions. In reading Graham’s earlier work I thought she sometimes treated the self as an abstraction, as Wallace Stevens and other philosophically inclined poets often do. But this collection comes down firmly on the physicality of our being. Its urgency is infectious.